tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4175918637925915594.post808781537922319418..comments2017-03-14T15:42:38.935-07:00Comments on Fenrir Thomas: 5sd064 Turning the power-ups into pickup-able itemsAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09167201120887886531noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4175918637925915594.post-58008181851403148642017-03-14T15:42:38.935-07:002017-03-14T15:42:38.935-07:00Hello Thomas!
I want to start off by saying that ...Hello Thomas!<br /><br />I want to start off by saying that I enjoyed reading your post. It was well structured and it was written in a style that made it easy to follow, such as leaving personal reflections until the end and describing your work process throughout the blog! Keep it up!<br />Some areas that could use some slight improvement, however; at one point you mention: “same as the wide shot for our orb that obliterates all in its path” having not read your previous blogposts I don’t know what the orb does except for what you mention here. Also, in one sentence you write “They look just like the power-up you receive on a square plate…”, I’m not sure what you meant by this, at first glance I thought you were referring to a square plate that gives you a power-up but on second glance I understand it as the power-up is depicted on the square plate. This might need some rewording to be a bit clearer.<br /><br />Another thing that could have helped clarify the power-ups as pickups; would have been to show an image of the pickup, followed by an image of the corresponding power-up in the hacking mode.<br /><br />Good luck with finalizing the project!<br />David Bångnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4175918637925915594.post-40480276858194576252017-03-14T10:06:17.468-07:002017-03-14T10:06:17.468-07:00I apologize for the late publish, it seems like it...I apologize for the late publish, it seems like it did not actually go through when i made it earlier. But hey, it's up now.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09167201120887886531noreply@blogger.com